Money shot meme
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tasyfa - post the bits of your fic where people actually get off. Hers is absolutely fascinating, so I thought it might be interesting to have a shuffle through some of mine and do it. All a bit random - if I did all my band fic I'd be here all day!
All links lead to Rockfic, where - if you haven't already - you should buy a membership!
Dark Water - Gamma Ray, Dirk/Kai
Pain of muscles forced beyond any sane limits vanished in the fire that consumed them both, the white heat of the rage that had begun to burn so long ago finally loosed to scorch them both until with a scream through clenched teeth Dirk came, pumped his hips to smash into Kai with a force that threatened to tumble them both to the ground.
Whiteout, fade to black, falling into the darkness--
--and lost.
About A Boy - Zico Chain, Chris/Paul
And he jerks against the bed, fucking down into it while the clench of his muscles squeezes Paul’s fingers, and the sight and the sound and the smell catches him by surprise and he crashes his mouth against Chris’ shoulder, bites it and humps against his hip. Fingers curl, and Chris yelps with surprise when he feels the hot splash of Long’s come against his flank.
The Return Of The Alien Drum Bunny - Edguy, Felix/Tobi
Hotter and brighter and now the shivers shot down his limbs and met more on the way back and--
He came with a grunt, ground his hips up, shuddered and gasped; wetness and heat on his belly that had their bodies sliding even easier told him that Tobi had apparently enjoyed himself too.
Moonlight Sonata - Angra/Gamma Ray, Andre Matoos/Dirk Schlachter
He rose up on his toes, forced André’s chest even harder into the surface he braced against and heat exploded from him; the gasps he couldn’t muffle washed across the side of André’s face in a series of sharp exhalations, the jerk of his hips and convulsive tightness of his hand enough to bring the other man off, too. He convulsed under him, each twist of muscle and heat accompanied by a burst of sound; Dirk clutched him around the waist, pressed his face to the hot, sweaty nape of his neck, and ground his teeth for the pleasurable aftershocks that rolled up and down his body.
Rage - Gamma Ray, Kai/Dirk
A hard slap, then the heel of his hand driven into his side - almost a fist but not quite, more than a slap but less than a punch - and with a whoosh of air he folded into the bedcovers and came. His hips ground themselves into the slippery wetness of his own semen, Kai riding him down and yelling his own orgasm in Dirk’s ear.
Trick Of The Light (Drabble) - Gamma Ray, Kai/Henjo
Coherence flees when lips wrap around his cock. A matter of moments and he hunches, humps his cock down that willing throat.
Smug smirk on thin lips as he wipes what he couldn’t swallow from his mouth.
Trichomania - Gamma Ray, Dirk/Dan
Dan threw his hips forward, his last thrusts hard enough to drive Dirk along the bed, his neck forced into an ever sharper angle from the drag on his scalp; he shrieked and came, the shots splashing as high as Dan’s pillow, spurting from beneath his body where he arched back and tried to force more of his skin into contact with Dan’s, ease the sweet yank on his hair.
Ok, that'll do! That covers the 2007 fic, and it's interesting to see how many of them don't have a 'money shot' at all. Anyway, interesting exercise - if anyone wants me to work through some of the older or the longer fics, I'll do it. In the meantime, it was fun anyway!
tasyfa - post the bits of your fic where people actually get off. Hers is absolutely fascinating, so I thought it might be interesting to have a shuffle through some of mine and do it. All a bit random - if I did all my band fic I'd be here all day!All links lead to Rockfic, where - if you haven't already - you should buy a membership!
Dark Water - Gamma Ray, Dirk/Kai
Pain of muscles forced beyond any sane limits vanished in the fire that consumed them both, the white heat of the rage that had begun to burn so long ago finally loosed to scorch them both until with a scream through clenched teeth Dirk came, pumped his hips to smash into Kai with a force that threatened to tumble them both to the ground.
Whiteout, fade to black, falling into the darkness--
--and lost.
About A Boy - Zico Chain, Chris/Paul
And he jerks against the bed, fucking down into it while the clench of his muscles squeezes Paul’s fingers, and the sight and the sound and the smell catches him by surprise and he crashes his mouth against Chris’ shoulder, bites it and humps against his hip. Fingers curl, and Chris yelps with surprise when he feels the hot splash of Long’s come against his flank.
The Return Of The Alien Drum Bunny - Edguy, Felix/Tobi
Hotter and brighter and now the shivers shot down his limbs and met more on the way back and--
He came with a grunt, ground his hips up, shuddered and gasped; wetness and heat on his belly that had their bodies sliding even easier told him that Tobi had apparently enjoyed himself too.
Moonlight Sonata - Angra/Gamma Ray, Andre Matoos/Dirk Schlachter
He rose up on his toes, forced André’s chest even harder into the surface he braced against and heat exploded from him; the gasps he couldn’t muffle washed across the side of André’s face in a series of sharp exhalations, the jerk of his hips and convulsive tightness of his hand enough to bring the other man off, too. He convulsed under him, each twist of muscle and heat accompanied by a burst of sound; Dirk clutched him around the waist, pressed his face to the hot, sweaty nape of his neck, and ground his teeth for the pleasurable aftershocks that rolled up and down his body.
Rage - Gamma Ray, Kai/Dirk
A hard slap, then the heel of his hand driven into his side - almost a fist but not quite, more than a slap but less than a punch - and with a whoosh of air he folded into the bedcovers and came. His hips ground themselves into the slippery wetness of his own semen, Kai riding him down and yelling his own orgasm in Dirk’s ear.
Trick Of The Light (Drabble) - Gamma Ray, Kai/Henjo
Coherence flees when lips wrap around his cock. A matter of moments and he hunches, humps his cock down that willing throat.
Smug smirk on thin lips as he wipes what he couldn’t swallow from his mouth.
Trichomania - Gamma Ray, Dirk/Dan
Dan threw his hips forward, his last thrusts hard enough to drive Dirk along the bed, his neck forced into an ever sharper angle from the drag on his scalp; he shrieked and came, the shots splashing as high as Dan’s pillow, spurting from beneath his body where he arched back and tried to force more of his skin into contact with Dan’s, ease the sweet yank on his hair.
Ok, that'll do! That covers the 2007 fic, and it's interesting to see how many of them don't have a 'money shot' at all. Anyway, interesting exercise - if anyone wants me to work through some of the older or the longer fics, I'll do it. In the meantime, it was fun anyway!
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