I'm sure maryqueen517 [Queenie, I'm guessing?] will be glad for an honest, serious beta. If she only wanted to hear "It's great! Don't change a word" she wouldn't have sent it over, right? More than likely she values your opinion and, even if a few things might upset her a bit, she knows it's not a personal attack, and will take it as part of a good beta.
[places tip of his finger on Andy's forehead and pushes her back into a couch]
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branchandroot
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Date: 2005-09-18 04:31 am (UTC)[places tip of his finger on Andy's forehead and pushes her back into a couch]
Rest. Now.